https://trablogger.wordpress.com/2015/02/01/flash-fiction-chain-6/
Once again, a group of writers from different parts of the globe join forces to create one linear adventure. The theme this time? Love. The photograph above serves as the inspirational theme for the 6th Flash Fiction Chain hosted by Jithin of ProTraBlogger. Give his beautiful site a visit and feast your eyes on the inspirational photos or read about his exciting adventures.
A comprehensive list of important characters in the story: (Main)
Anna Brighton- a 32 year old CEO that owns and runs a publishing company
Alex Burns – well established author, Anna’s ex,
Toby Blackwell’s cousin Melissa Doyle – the bride, Anna’s dear friend
Toby Blackwell – co-owns the Blackwell estate, Alexis’ cousin (Supporting characters)
Jenny- Anna’s secretary Adam – Owner of Adam and Eve’s Harrison – Melissa’s fiance.
Percy Tuppence – Owner of the ring shop I am entrusted to write Part 8 of the story…
To know what has happened already, check out the previous 7 parts below…
PART 1 by Sona https://sonaonline.wordpress.com/2015/02/01/the-wedding-bells-flash-fiction-chain-6/
PART 2 by Yinglan https://hiddenstarsfiction.wordpress.com/2015/02/02/the-wedding-bells-part-2-flash-fiction-chain-6/
PART 3 by Priceless Joy http://pricelessjoy.co/2015/02/02/team-flash-fiction-chain-6-part-3/
PART 4 by Frenesthetist http://frenesthetist.com/2015/02/03/the-wedding-bells/
PART 5 by Dr Ko https://drkottaway.wordpress.com/2015/02/04/the-wedding-bells-part-5-flash-fiction-chain-6/
PART 6 by Sweety https://sweetykannoth.wordpress.com/2015/02/05/team-flash-fiction-chain/
PART 7 by Quill https://itchyquill.wordpress.com/2015/02/05/the-wedding-bells-part-7-flash-fiction-chain-6/
Anna helped Percy up, and began to wonder what the hell just happened. She somehow felt that whoever stole that ring was obviously a wedding crasher and was almost certain it was the plan of the tall blondy they saw earlier on with Harrison, and she swore to kill the bitch if she ever lays her hand on her…
Toby are you okay? She said as she saw him running up to her with his blood stained shirt,
Yeah, I just died for a few seconds then the Cupid shot me and I woke up madly in love with you, he said as he gave her a wink
Who? Anna panicked
I’m kidding, Toby giggled, and she felt eased up, she couldn’t imagine if that had actually happened, she can’t deny now the spark in their friendship but she obviously would have blamed Mel for that prayer, now he was kidding, she can now allow fate to do the job
Oh cut it out, where’s the goddamn ring screamed Percy who was already agitated with the event,
Sorry folks, that chap runs faster than a Jaguar, that’s not the issue however, and don’t go blaming the unknown Anna, he said as he turned to her and noticed the fall of her ego, he liked it.
Okay I thought of something Anna breathed, I have my grandmother’s ring with me, I always carry it about, it’s sort of like a good charm for me, but I can give it up for Mel, then tell her story after the honeymoon so she can give it back,
Nice idea, echoed Toby and Precel, do you have it here?
Yeah, here you go, taking off the ring from her third finger, and handing it over to Toby, she need not worry if it would fit Mel, they are same size in everything…
Toby got into the car, and tried to start it up, but it had also frozen from the shock of what had happened, “goddamnit” he muttered
We have to walk out of the street so we can find a taxi, Mel should be biting her hair by now, Anna said as she patted Toby’s hair
As they walked down the street waving off old Precel, they didn’t realize how far away the street was from the main road until they asked a jogger and Anna almost slumped when she heard about 5KM
We’d never make it on time, she cried
Anna, have faith, he replied as he cupped her hands in his, the current that rushed though his veins made him accept that he really wanted her, but he needed the perfect moment to let go
Do you mind if we stop by that shop? My legs are burning from the friction, Anna asked
Of course my love, he said as he led her into the shop
It was a jewelry shop, somewhat antique and a tall blonde lady walked up to her, and she knew it was same lady she saw with Harrison earlier on in the coffee shop, without thinking twice, she gave the lady a blow to the nose, and the lady who was now bleeding, grabbed her by her hair, then world war 3 started
Toby not knowing what to do exactly, tried to separate the fight and instead he got a blow to his nose and started bleeding…
Cops shouted a guy from door,
Shit Anna, we have to get outta here, as he dragged her from the floor and they raced to the elevator.
Let me go, let me go screamed Anna who was ready to tear down the soul of the blondy who is stealing her friend’s man
You shouldn’t have don’t that you know, we’re not so sure the sort relationship she had with Harrison , that could be violation of human rights, Toby said with so much concern in his voice
Anna stood there with nothing to say, finding the perfect words now was difficult, then she looked at him and noticed her hair strand on his hair, and leaned over to flush it off, when their eyes met, his eyes locking into hers made her tremble. He ran his hands over her cheekbone then her neckline, back to her lips again, Anna moaned and closed her eyes not minding she was in the elevator, then she felt his lips pressing against hers, she responded swiftly, kissing him with the passion she had suppressed, then she felt his hand traveling down somewhere, she let out a cry, then the elevator’s bell rang, but it sounded more like wedding bells to her, then a voice called out
Anna?
She stole herself away from the kiss and froze still in Toby’s arms,
Alex?….
What will happen next, how would Alex react seeing the love of his life kissing another?, or will Toby win her love from Alex? Who is the tall blondy? To know this find out from the next chapter by Austin https://draftworkshopblog.wordpress.com
Great stuff Ruth! The tension is really building, and I like the line from Toby about Cupid at the start! Another great story for the chain! It flows with a fantastic energy too! Well done 😀
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Thank you quill 😁 glad I didn’t kill the energy…
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It had pace, energy and excitement, plus was nicely written. I really enjoyed it 🙂
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Thank you 😁😁
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Wow. I Can’t even wait for what happens next.
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Me too
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So much suspense , fights, romance, kissing scene, love triangle. Sounds like a Bollywood flick 😀
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Haha, thanks Jithin😁 you know I love Bollywood
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haha.. sure I do 😀 You could have included a dance too 😀
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Yeah, how come I forgot the dance part 😞, I would learn that dance someday😁
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haha.. I was also wondering the same 😉
Sure, you will learn it one day 🙂
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Yes I will😀
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😀
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I agree with Jathin, on so many places I found myself imagining Bollywood stars doing the whole scene especially the nose blow one. Terrific piece. I am eagerly waiting for my turn 🙂
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😃😃 I’m now an Indian by fiction 😉 I really wish I was India, thanks dear….
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Hi Ruth! Such an intriguing scene with Harrison and the blonde woman. I loved the elevator cliffhanger too. I thoroughly enjoyed every bits and bytes of it 😀
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Thanks love, I’m glad u loved it 😁😁
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Yes, I did! You’re most welcome doll! ❤
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Hey Ruth, you there? Its your turn in fact
https://trablogger.wordpress.com/2015/02/15/flash-fiction-chain-6-update/
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Hi, okay will check it out
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Alright 🙂
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Jithin, I’m lost, it’s same story
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https://trablogger.wordpress.com/2015/02/15/flash-fiction-chain-6-update/
check this
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Just had a look, now I understand, I actually haven’t been following up the story and even if I have to, it’d take a lot of time to put it together, pls, I’m sorry I can’t meet up with this one😞 it’d be really tasking and I have tests coming up, pls try to understand. Thanks…
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Its alright. Good luck with the tests doc 🙂
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Thanks for understanding, and thanks for the wishes…
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You’re welcome 🙂
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